Come to the Darkness

by ToPzY TuRvY TwIsT

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Come to the Darkness

Come to the Darkness

Lie on your back,
Don't scream in pain,
Let the devils,
Come take you again.

Sleep, Sleep,
Come and sleep
They'll let you
Come to the darkness.

Thrive off me,
live in me,
I am darkness,
Which you can see.

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Jan 4th 2006
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Oddball Says:

I dont like the last line.
The rest is awesome, but "Which you can see" sounds wrong...
It seems to me it should be something about how you cannot see.
It just seems like that to me.
Great poems though.

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