There

by Tiomara

in Poetry.

There

I'd rather be there than here,
hearing your voice in my ear.
To feel your touch on my skin,
and the fire that is buring within.
To make you laugh and smile,
to make life itself worth while.
To melt into your gentle kiss,
layed softly upon my lips.
To lay in bed and sunggle close,
that one I wish the most.
For there it will be just us,
which in itself is a plus.
Where a touch becomes a caress,
moving expertly with finess.
Along the shoulders down the spine,
I am yours, and you are mine.
I yearn for your loving care,
which is not here, but there.
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Mature Dec 20th 2005
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narrative romance sensual
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Well, it is actually one of my happier poems I wrote in college algebra. I really don't know who it is too, because I have never been that close to someone who is that far away, though I am sure one day it will happen.

So yeah, read up and give me a good comment, I am all up for constructive criticism.<3

edit: I made front page! woot!

Comments

Tsuzuki and Hisoka08 Says:

Nice poem! I really like it. Sounds like your longing for a lost love. I'm so random but yea, nice!!!!

Tiomara Says:

thanks, and lol, that sounds about right. I used to have someone, but he ended up not being what I expected.

Andreja77 Says:

it.

Kawa11 N3ko Says:

This is really a beautiful poem! Wonderful work

Yellow XXVII Says:

Awesome!The poem and the pic go perfectly together.And also I think you learneda valuble life lesson from that guy;choose carefully cause guys are weird,and trust me I know 'cause I am a guy.

yaizel Says:

kyaa that make my face go all red who1 jojoj fav!
so cute, the feeling of the heart

Catgir Says:

that was suu touching. I loved the poem.. T_T suu beautiful.