One as Forever

by rennehh

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One as Forever

A place in my heart.
A kingdom of love.
Fortressed by passion.
Brought on by adoration.

A place I'll remain.
Forever with you by my side.
Crouching into heavenly sleep.
We'll be together an enternity to last.

A memory drifting.
Our love burning with nostalgia
Our fears hidden by regret.
A sleepless slumber we await.

Time passes by, your youth begins to decay
My eyes grow heavy as your image rests onset.
Your voice rocks me into a slumber.
A serene death leading our lives astray.

Temptation fades, pulses stop.
We are left to die together.
One as whole.
One as forever.
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Dec 18th 2005
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death emotional forever one together
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Well, I decided to write a random poem. I had inspiration, so it didn't take long at all. I do enjoy this poem, I am rather proud of it. I hope you guys do enjoy.

- Ta

Comments

evil turnip Says:

wow. this is really good! you have really captured the image of romance in this poem!
nice one
evil turnip

rennehh Says:

Why thank-you! ;

karumenu Says:

I love it~ and it's so romantic

karumenu Says:

I love it~ and it's so romantic or something... wow it's really nice :lollipop:

rennehh Says:

Thank-you!

Kagome09 Says:

I like this...I feel the emotion...Very good

rennehh Says:

Thank-you very much!