A heart of pure black
Shows what others lack
The courage to hurt and kill
Watching with amusement
As anothers blood spills
A silent heart beats with intentions true
Looking malevolent as another turns blue
Wishing death apon those in my way
Dismantled corpses lay in my wake
Eye's black as space
Plotting to obliterate the human race
My skin so cold to the touch
A disturbing sensation with a rush
The darkness of my mind
Shall keep my soul confined
Such things as remorse and compassion
Are thing I do not ration
Revenge for all thing I've lost
But maybe being black comes at a cost....
Comments
MangakaMaiden Says:
Thats really cool stuff.
Faliat Says:
Really dark... I love it!
zekkus Says:
Swwet poetry I love the bg you put Sasuke in the marks need a lil work but over all a great pic.
redeemalles Says:
I love the mood, really cold. And the ending of how the narator wonders about the cost of it all, brilliant.
moonlight shadow Says:
this poem is soo well writen
ing this ..and for the pic of Sasuke its really awsome..perfect picture fer this poem
Ratso Says:
its awsm
nice and dark
looks evil
jma192 Says:
I just like this work..
Is reeeeally nice!
and, also, I like the color black!
that means.. this work is much better!
sasseh Says:
wicked awesome!