Screaming Silence

by Retro Blue

in Completed Works

Screaming Silence

I'm hearing silence
Hands gripping hair
Mouth gape'n wide
Screaming in the Silence
A voice that is not heard
Cursing thy name
Damning thy soul
With these words unheard
Echos of past voices
Resound within the hallow halls
Nails screeching and breaking
Upon this blackboard of Life
Alone, crying, dieing a little everyday
The silence taking hold of life
Suffocating all sound from time
Richoceting off the wall of bodies
The screaming silence dieing out
Fading from the ears of lost
Never find me...
I'm Screaming in the Silence

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Dec 2nd 2005
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I don't know why I wrote this. I was sitting in english and words just began flowing into my mind and I couldn't stop writting. But I think what triggered it all is that thegirl behind me ask for my help on her Serial Killer paper that was due for that class. Yet again, I do feel as it there is some significance to my poem. I've been in depression for a while I guess this shows how I feel. Not being heard, no one noticing and just the simple fact that I wanna be found.

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Ace Kun Says:

Oh, this is very interesting. Good work.

kuraimiko Says:

I have a question -do you know that preview image you put with the muscolar boy full of scars? Can you please link it to me in a bigger size? I can't see it.... PLEASEEEEE

trish the rebel Says:

OMFG!!! This is really great. I can feel the strength of the emotions and words.

Virangelus Says:

Now this one I notice never developed a rhyme scheme and therefore I didn't find myself missing or looking for one at random junctures, and so felt more pleasant to me but it is afterall an opinion. I like the begining.