When the metal bled no shame

by 202224

in Completed Works

When the metal bled no shame

What if the Percattos never came,
And the metal never ever bled no shame,
And what if the steel doors were never blown down?

What if they never dug up that mound,
What if Yahweh never went to town,
What if Dawar decided not to stick around?

It wouldn't quite be the same.
But who's to blame?
It's not like consciousness was really meant to be.

But what happens when what's real
And what is dream start to mix, congeal
And what you believe is all that you can see?

It's not blindness- It's reality
> 'Vader's Got nuthin on me' by 202224

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Dec 2nd 2005
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Well, this came out...I don't know how. Culmination of events to my current opinions and such. No one would get it.

I'll sell a tell-all book one day.

Sorry for being gone for so long. Don't expect any more.

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demonsaya Says:

:stare: It's beautiful, rythmic, and I have NO clue what you're saying Good to have ya back.

Yammo Says:

Not bad, very surreal

NoodleNeko Says:

awesome.
Oi... where the heck have you been. Haven't seen a post from you in months.

Nickkazama Says:

Wow great picture, yeah... no one's going to ge that! lol

Good poem/writing also, it's deep, which I like deep stuff.