A Perfect Haiku

by Chazzie

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A Perfect Haiku

A perfect Haiku
Is not something I would write
You can tell from mine.

A perfect Haiku
Has rhythm like no other
Sweet, suave poetry

A perfect Haiku
Is not easy to create
It takes some thinking!

Sometimes a Haiku
Repeats parts insessantly
And annoys us all.

Haikus, my fine friend
Are long and can be quite deep
And that, is perfect.
> 'Gaia gurl colored #2' by Chazzie

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Nov 14th 2005
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Yeah, someone in my English class was writing Haiku and I had to give it a shot.

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cheese Says:

woo! i love it! Haikus are fun, mebbe i should go write one

Yanxie Says:

I suck at poetry.

PYROkineticRikku1 Says:

nice!. congrats on getting the front page!

sasseh Says:

awesome! ^^ and she has your hat! x3 nice poem too. ^^

sasseh Says:

yayyyyyy! you got top writting!!!!!!! congrats! ^^ =D =3 yaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy! go chazzzzzzzzzzzzzzie! ^^

Prismind Says:

wow. haven't heard good haikus in a while. Great work Chazzie

Shino Says:

Awesome! Much deserved congratulations on hitting front page. *awards badge* Keep up the good work.