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And Closer Still
A tear. Another one.
... Trickled down my cheek into your palm,
the sin, we once again commit,
when once again, we meet.
Thy pale eyelids, fluttered close,
while your fingers, playing symphonies,
on the fairest skin... the melodies.
Soothing whispers were heard,
telling tales, leading,
lips craving for the once felt... needing.
But the defilement was long lost
forgotten and denied,
washed away by a virgin tear... purified.
A scream. Another one, then silence.
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Comments
MetalCoreDragon Says:
thats really good well done!!
ChaoticIllusions Says:
Wow. I would like to use this in a drawing. Permission to use? *cubbie face*
ChaoticIllusions Says:
Oh yeah, and I forgot to include this
That this is the best peice of poetry I have EVER read in my whole 12 years of living. Im not kidding!
black phoenix Says:
beautiful work, bleu claire. i like the way that you break up your lines.. it helps your readers catch the right flow. the diction you used was very effective towards reaching the right mood/atmosphere. well done.