tell me if you can
why it is
that i return here
there is nothing here for me
you have nothing i need
yet i can't be without for an hour
i seek for friends
i seek for love
i seek to be one
to be accepted
and all you do is lead me
to a 404.
my loneliness in life
has seeped through
to be my loneliness online.
i stare at these letters
their forms ring in the hollows of my heart
the void that longs to be filled.
so don't leave me
don't go away
i need you
i need your letters
i need your hidden face
KahlanAmnl signed off at 2:55:15 PM
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Oct 29th 2004
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this is my personal depiction of the internet.
ps: kahlanamnl isn't real. it's just something i came up with.
Haha, I wanted to say things like it being accurate, nice and striking - but the others said that too :( So; I also really like the intro and exit, the way you wrap it up like that. It looks like msn, but it's a monologue, the internet being too dumb to answer.
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OmoteBen Says:
D: That's actually pretty nice. I like it.
Wow. It ownz me.
And that icon? I AM IN LOVE WITH THAT ICON.
xax Says:
Wow, it's poetry I don't hate on sight! Probably 'cause it's about the internet
aesiraven Says:
Wow, that's deep for being about our old friend the interweb.
and true.
I approve. :>
peanut0565 Says:
omg thats hilarious
shadowwolfgirl Says:
kool =3 I HAVE THAT ICONNN
The Wyrm Says:
that's...disturbingly accurate.
krisCrash Says:
Haha, I wanted to say things like it being accurate, nice and striking - but the others said that too :( So; I also really like the intro and exit, the way you wrap it up like that. It looks like msn, but it's a monologue, the internet being too dumb to answer.
JiyuKodai Says:
[color=green]The icon is the snits.
The poem is so true. T_T It discribes me to the core.[/color]
StaysUpAllNight Says:
Glad I'm not the only one who thinks of the internet that way.
IlurveCaspian Says:
That Icon pwns.
Love love!