[ Try Harder ]

by Lacerated

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Mature Jun 22nd 2005
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hatter
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Please, sir.
Try harder,
You gotta believe,
In order to achieve,
I concur,
My vision's a blur.

You went for the kill,
Or was it the thrill,
Backstabbed and eyegouged,
Cut in two, and choked,
Yet I'm still alive you see,
All you did was make me bleed.

As long as I live,
As long as you breathe,
The ill consequences that
Make me work until your soul
Has been utterly destroyed.

So by all means,
Hit me again.

Comments

rag Says:

i find it amusing when suicide attempts go wrong

ihatefrenchcooking Says:

He looks happy being dead.

BloodThirstyPika Says:

awesome picture and poem thing

Lil morbid Says:

Wow. It's like how every one tries to kill Morbid, but she just gets up and (I will be using sick details) tears their skin of, picks their musles off, and lets em bleed... It's deranged...