Danielle Comic - Intro Pg.

by kippixin

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Jun 18th 2005
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yar uploading this here cause I have nowhere else to upload it.

It's the intro page to my danielle comic.

For those that don't know what this is, go to DA and wait until the inked goes up

FOR THOSE THAT DO -- look I actually did a page

Writing guide:

"First Panel
Narrator: It starts off bleakly...
*In Picture- Danielle: no, no.. I'm o-okay...*
Narrator: ...there was no end to my pain.

Second
Narrator: I... became a shadow.
He lied. He never loved me.

Third
Narrator: I had nothing left...
...he was my life. I was --

Fourth
First Voice (Sedna): Oh God! Jesus, Danielle! You're making it sound like an angsty love drama! Or a horror story!
Narrator (Danielle): Well it was!
Sedna: give me a break!

Fifth
Sedna: Boo-hoo! He didn't love you! Big deal!
Danielle: well he DIDN'T!

Sixth
Sedna: Well, he told the truth. What did you want him to do? Lie?
Danielle: Why, yes! If he did I wouldn't be DEAD, now would I?!

Seventh:
Sedna: Yada, yada. That's your own fault. You're just bitter.
Mimi: *pops out of nowhere* What are you two arguing about now?
Danielle: Hmph.

Eight
Danielle (off screen): SEE! There's your problem right there!
Sedna (off screen): What? The fact I have an awesome girlfriend?
Danielle (off screen): Yeh!
Mimi: ...Mew?

Ninth
Sedna: yeh, whatever. I'm gonna go bake a cake or something.
Danielle: Good! Now I can finish my story!
Sedna: Might as well make dinner while I'm at it...

Tenth
Danielle: ...
Mimi: ...?

Eleventh
Mimi: I'll listen to your story!
Danielle: Nah, Mimi. Go help your girlfriend make dinner. I'm hungry.
Mimi: okay ;_;

12
Danielle: ...

13
Danielle: SO... where was I?

Comments

AshHavynn Says:

lmao
mew...?

LAEluu Says:

So does this mean you're going to ink it so I can read it? ; It looks really cute, though, from what I can tell so far. *___*