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Jun 9th 2005
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Well... I dont like this result because of the bambus - it dont works!

Maybe s.o. like it ..

please write your criticism (well i see it would be many xD )

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calenure Says:

very cute! and very soft!

Azndude Says:

Mind if I go all out?
As you said. The bamboo. The grass could use more depth to it. Some shading and highlights could do.
Lastly, the leaves stick out alittle too much. That all.
Still a fav from me though. The sky is lovely.

supa02 Says:

It's excellent! The girl is very beautiful. And her clothes are so cute =3

Shuichi Says:

I like it JUST fine

Gardius Says:

I like it, although like you said the bamboo could be better. Still. *faves*

Kisara Says:

Yeah The Bamboo but the still WICKED JOB !!

heza san Says:

Yeah I agree about the bamboo, but the cuteness of the girl and the sky more than makes up for it

SlushPuppy Says:

I agree about the bamboo and the grass.... the bamboo fence feels extremely flat... the problem with the grass is the stamp... same with the maple leaves >_< don't use stamps! but otherwise is has that loverly velvet feel which I love! And the girl is well done and the sky is gorgeous. The mountains also fade out well. With the bamboo try making the highlight not at the top of it like you've done, but at at the side so it becomes shaded again at the top. The other part with it is that the partitions and the binding on it don't work because they aren't following where the curve should be.

Gw3nn0w Says:

I Love It

Gw3nn0w Says:

I Love It