help meh!!

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Jun 5th 2005
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help! I'm going to sell this as prints at otakon and I need critques and ideas
( colors for clothing will help too )

there are curtians and a window in the background and it's going to have a sort of dark look to it

that's a mirror on the couch ( through the looking glass, get it? xD ).. and there's going to be like glowy looking butterflies or fish coming out of it

any ideas for other fanart is greatly appreciated too!!

note: I am such a conformist :0 alice in wonderland...sheesh [psst..the white rabbit is my fav x3 ]

edit: added the march hare and the door mouse and labeled everyone :}

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sleepycarrot Says:

try alot of warm colors for the lighter colors and the darker, flatter areas do like an indigo.

try also neutrals on the people and then make their clothes a slightly wilder color like a bright yellow, but don't let it get too wild, or it'll distract from them.

"alice" i think should have peach for the ruffles and then like a purple and red thing going on for most of it.

the "rabbit" maybe a warm yellow and green thing going on overall.

the mad hatter is hard to pinpoint, so try browns mixed with different colors, maybe? give him a sort-of "patchwork" look.

an whoever has the wine glass (the queen of hearts?) i think should go for a white theme. to balance out all the color. but give her some color in the trims and something bold somewhere.

maybe try the indigo in the dark corners and then do like a deep red on lighter red checker pattern for the background? D:

:shuts up before i get shot: sorry...

sleepycarrot Says:

btw-i really love this piccu. please upload the finished version, i can't wait to see it. D: