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May 22nd 2005
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A preview of my very soon-coming series, Team Amazing. This is a picture from the first scene. The main character in the episode, Tobias Jones, has just woken up at 2.00 PM... Meaning that he has failed his target, written on his notice board. I need voices for only a few characters, as the only main character in episode 1 is Tobias... The other four will be introduced in the second episode. If you're interested, please contact me on AIM, Tom Blagden (yes, I got AIM working again!)

Tobias: Late-teens American male, middle-pitched voice.
Boss: Gruff American male, deep voice.
Scientist: British, posh, high-pitched voice.

I'll give you a copy of the scrip if you think you can do a voice. Thank you.

Comments

xenon Says:

I suggest adding shading.

Ratio Says:

Background could do with more detail, draw an outside on the layer behind the windoow then lower the alph of the window..... yapyapyapyapyapyapyapyapyapyap

beefhead Says:

interesting, i shall watch when finnito.

gaymountain Says:

It would look better if there were some detail on the window. Looks cool though, I like the lack of lines, which is odd, because I love lines.

AdReNiLine Says:

All it needs is a little shading, and i dont know but those eyes look ENORMOUS

sketche Says:

background colors are too bright, also consider using some shading and give the window an outline. I also think you should add more detail to the room instead of having it that simple, gradients perhaps? Otherwise, not bad.