Time
disappearing in the hour glass
of misplaced keys
to doors of the wanting
there cries echo down the hall
of desire, the never ending condor
of lies, and deceptive grace
thrown upon the masses
Ooooooo... I have a general idea as to what it's about but I think I'm wrong (a stink at this). Well directly it is about how desire is a lie formed by society that leads to want and people are always in a rush to unlock to "doors of the wanting". Deeper than that I cannot go without being the author.
Hey you added the angel part! Everyone I accidentally read it that way so yeah give me partial credit for the title...just kidding lol. I know I know Im weird. The picture is really weird and so is the poem...but good.
Comments
FaintWhispers Says:
Good and deep, just how I like my poetry. Fantastic job.
clarebrady Says:
Ooooooo... I have a general idea as to what it's about but I think I'm wrong (a stink at this). Well directly it is about how desire is a lie formed by society that leads to want and people are always in a rush to unlock to "doors of the wanting". Deeper than that I cannot go without being the author.
malice676767 Says:
Hey you added the angel part! Everyone I accidentally read it that way so yeah give me partial credit for the title...just kidding lol. I know I know Im weird. The picture is really weird and so is the poem...but good.
omegareaper Says:
Short, but good