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Crystal Coffin
Is Somebody Out There?
Tell Me It\'s A Dream...
Within This Nightmare
A Crystal Coffin...
With My Name On it
But It Will Not Open...
Never Granting Me Death
Locked Within Innocence
But Always Trapped In Guilt
Lost In This Maze
Made Without An Entrance
A Sympony Of Riddles
Without A Question Being Asked
A Chest Of Truth
But The Key Is Lost
Ghosts Of The Past
Fight Phantoms Of The Future
An Obsidian Mask
Without A Face To Hide
Wings Of Countless Angels
Lost Within The Fires Of Hell
The Kings Of Thousand Kingdoms
But All Have Lost Their Crown
Words Spoken In Silence
Without Ears To Hear
Words Written On Parchment
But None To Read Them
A Tender Heart
Within A Iron Shell
A Tender Voice
Lost In Countless Screams
Is Somebody Out There?
Tell Me It\'s A Dream...
Within This Nightmare
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Comments
TresAwesomeness Says:
Wow. Very Powerful, I love it.
(ah, such a short comment. Due to speechless-ness)
Zelta Says:
amazing.. as usual.. I love it ^__^
malice676767 Says:
This is really great...nice work.
Night Phoenix Says:
poweful word in this omega i love it
ForgottenInnocence Says:
absolutely love it
this is very nicely written, I'm sitting in a room full of people and yet reading this made me feel as though I was all alone and experiencing what you wrote. Very very nice poem
Nightowl10175 Says:
Wow, this is really good.If this is the poem you were speaking of the night really did have favor on you!
Nickkazama Says:
very good. this has a wide use of vocabulary...which shows how are well demonstrative in putting your emotion across.