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Penetrate
Throw your swords
on a gold covered alter
void of life
Empty hands to rescue
the thoughts of the lost
as the soar cries for remembrance
ghost tears on the smile
of the suicidal dream
divine in the ocean of honesty
Save the heroic slave
from the inner demon
captive in tormented speech
But will we forgive?
Opening the mind
that is the key to sanity
relinquishing all faith in miracles
The web kills the spider
as it sucks the
horsefly dry
No time to separate
the breathing,
from those without air
Still we hate
blinded by an obvious lie
resurrect my love again
No, we won\'t forgive...
copyright Valerie Long
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Comments
Haunting and very, very beautiful
frostbittenkitten Says:
nice....very beautiful....i love the way you write
malice676767 Says:
Interesting title...I know where you like penetration in the behind by lumber...LMAO!
Your poem is really good. But you cannot make the reader disappointed.
clarebrady Says:
*Caught into fog of poem*... hmmm... - OH! Very good.
omegareaper Says:
This is good...

this is really good...
Great job