Penetrate

by Nightowl10175

in Completed Works

Penetrate


Throw your swords
on a gold covered alter
void of life

Empty hands to rescue
the thoughts of the lost
as the soar cries for remembrance

ghost tears on the smile
of the suicidal dream
divine in the ocean of honesty

Save the heroic slave
from the inner demon
captive in tormented speech

But will we forgive?

Opening the mind
that is the key to sanity
relinquishing all faith in miracles

The web kills the spider
as it sucks the
horsefly dry

No time to separate
the breathing,
from those without air


Still we hate
blinded by an obvious lie
resurrect my love again

No, we won\'t forgive...



copyright Valerie Long



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May 15th 2005
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Um another off the top. Not sure if it belongs here

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RoseDincht Says:

Haunting and very, very beautiful

frostbittenkitten Says:

nice....very beautiful....i love the way you write

malice676767 Says:

Interesting title...I know where you like penetration in the behind by lumber...LMAO!

Your poem is really good. But you cannot make the reader disappointed.

clarebrady Says:

*Caught into fog of poem*... hmmm... - OH! Very good.

omegareaper Says:

This is good...

this is really good...

Great job