Um dont know

by malice676767

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Um dont know

May your soul surrender and open a door
of peace, love, and happiness to lay
Because the soul cannot win a fight without its
brothers and sisters in the dark
Let them bring light for your path to the sky
of truth in the night
Good night and I love thee
and wish a safe journey unto you

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May 4th 2005
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hey this is something I wrote for my friend one night at a delirious moment in time for me. I was half asleep but more awake then asleep to write. The true feeling come out at night. lol. Jazz hands for everyone!

©Poem Priscilla Begay

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Nightowl10175 Says:

This is to me!!! I like it, I would even if it wasn't for me. The ending, is good, because it brings closure, but opens a door to imagination

Nightowl10175 Says:

Hey dude, Derek Langley? Like Derek, and Mr. Langley...hmmmm

rennehh Says:

Nice poem.

omegareaper Says:

This one was also very cool, but well, so are all your poems :)

inferno Says:

hehe, it's a "lick: ing party here..? thtis is really nice