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Um dont know
May your soul surrender and open a door
of peace, love, and happiness to lay
Because the soul cannot win a fight without its
brothers and sisters in the dark
Let them bring light for your path to the sky
of truth in the night
Good night and I love thee
and wish a safe journey unto you
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Comments
Nightowl10175 Says:
This is to me!!! I like it, I would even if it wasn't for me. The ending, is good, because it brings closure, but opens a door to imagination
Nightowl10175 Says:
Hey dude, Derek Langley? Like Derek, and Mr. Langley...hmmmm
rennehh Says:
Nice poem.
omegareaper Says:
This one was also very cool, but well, so are all your poems :)
inferno Says:
hehe, it's a "lick: ing party here..?
thtis is really nice 