Failed Revolution

by rottenSTAR

in Completed Works

Failed Revolution

It seems the times have changed and gone
Gone back to what we fear
It’s simply really when you think this long
To lose contact, my dear
A long trip from reality is all to real it seems
Just because you want to wake up
Doesn’t mean you live in dreams
Time’s starting to show we’re out of luck
I’m feeling dead I’ve said it before
But every time I come out fine
Now I’ll amount to even more
More than when I was divine
Because now I know how it works
I’ve learned all the moves
At my feet are all the jerks
Who before forced me to lose
I’m the queen and it’s my right
I wear the crown of broken hearts
One by one you’ll obey in fright
Lick at the wounds from my poison darts
It only speeds up the process
It only hastens the pain
Don’t forget to clean your mess
Wash the blood down the drain
In death I’ll gain my glory
In death I’ll gain your fear
And thus will end my story
To live on as your nightmare
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Mature May 2nd 2005
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I guess this is impart to an early poem Dethrone.

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Mymindinrewind Says:

excellent visual, great content, and a decent flow. all the aspects of a great poem.

Nightowl10175 Says:

good imagery. Flowed well. Nice job!