Stitches

Can you see it now?
I�m falling apart
I�m losing my head,
My mind, my heart
The stitches are snapping
They�re coming undone
Too many fractures
To hope that we�ve won
Your smiles are endless
They empty your eyes
Such an unhappy mask
That you wear in disguise
There go my arms,
My legs, my soul
Such a huge heartache
Could swallow me whole
Can you see it now?
I�m ripping them out
These thousands of stitches
Just smother my doubt

> Skipping Stone

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May 2nd 2005

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The first stanza poured from my pencil while sitting in class one day (Written 15-21 April 2005)

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Dusk Whisper Says:

I kind of like the way that the stanzas aren't actually seperated, except by mouth, or thought, when one reads the poem. It creates an interesting and unique flow.

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