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slowly the ocean breeze lifted (im gonna call her girl because i havent thought of a name yet

) girls hair and twirled its glitstning ends together as she stared out on the shifting seas. the rain began to fall with such force that she hand to put her hand on the rail to help her stand. water began to fill the empty buckets around her. her thoughts flowed in and out as did the sea crashing violently before her.
\"you better get under deck dont want cha\' gettin no colds now\" a voice said from behind her. girl turned her shoulders to see the short slightly pudgy man walking to the hatch set neatly into the boats deck. she followed, every one else was down there nice and warm and she was soaking wet. she began to lower herself into the door when another friendlier voice spoke behind her.
\" hey miss your not going down there with those pirates are ya?\" the voice quavered as the speaker hid a small giggle which had seemingly came from nowhere.
\" No sir who in their right mind would do that?\" girl smiled there little roleplaying games were so pointless but non the less fun.
\"come stay in the cabin up here with me miss i wont hurt ya.\"
\" Oh really sir, last i heard you were the captain of this ship\"
\"foiled again\" sighed the speaker returning to his normal accented voice again. girl smiled and turned to look at the handsome man above her. his red hair was dripping from the nonstop rain as it just kept coming down.she climbed out from the hatch and walked face to face with the pirate.
\"sorry mabey another time\" she said though she did want to be with him she always felt nothing could harm her when she was with him. she turned to go down the hatch again failing to notice the small hand jesture the captain made to his crew down below. suddenly the hatch door snapped shut.
\"Hey! let me in!\" girl demanded
\"um sorry no body here come back in the mornin\' miss\"
girl turned ill get you back she thought in her head when really she was thanking them they had just givin her the opportunity she had been waiting for... she was alone with him.
Comments
tribal wolf Says:
Finally it Worked i was having trouble sumitting it!!
tribal wolf Says:
Kresh the girls name will be kresh!!!! *hugs rattlecat
soo. any suggestions for my red head captain, must start with an S.