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Confusing
~Confused~
Mind twisting and twirling,
Heart aching for answers,
Tears spilling down cheeks,
Head tilted down slightly,
Arms holding on tightly,
Not able to let go,
Eyes upturned with fear,
Not wanting to loose,
Red tinting pale cheeks,
Shy to what is known,
Lips quivering beneath,
So scared to hear…
The emotions,
The fears,
The doubts,
The sneers,
The good and bad,
All turned inside,
Nothing making,
Gripping only to exist,
What can I do,
I am so damn confused…
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Comments
alu Says:
So sad, but great :3
The sentence fragments add effect^^
...where do you get the pictures that go so well with your poems?
...I can't seem to find any o-o
DementedSoul3666 Says:
I love the poem and the picture goes well with it. You have true talent in what you do. I also do poetry but i havent made any poems lately. I get inspired by reading other people's work and yours inspires me. I hope that you will keep posting poems, I really enjoy reading them.
zerocool Says:
i like it
its awsome