Worked on this poem for awhile...
I guess you can get whatever you want from it.
I think it's kind of sad, but I think a lot of things are.
drew the picture to (kind of) go with it.
I shouldn't need to put this here, but just in case...
The poem is my property, do not reproduce any part of it without permission.
Comments
Nikki Tikki Says:
Yes, this is sad. But I love the visuals it invokes... I could never deal with this style, free form (kind of)... but I love good samples of it, and yours is good, I think!
I especially loved these little additions in brackets... at times, like, in the 3d verse, they change the whole picture.
I love this one. Thanks for telling me to lookit up!!!
spiralling angel Says:
I agree with Nikki. I love the images this brings. The brackets, too. All v.lovely. Nice work.
andyOthello Says:
This part:
i wanted to take your hand, but i didn't.
your fragile fascination
was just enough (for hesitation).
is my favourite. Can't say why, but, it's nice.