Still, and Forever

I still feel your lips on mine
pressing our love into exsitence
my hand in yours
letting go of all that grasps us
the air smelling of the euphoria we have created
never wanting youth to end
and summer romance to fade
wanting..
wishing..
needing..
to always be in your arms
and safe from a world of lonliness
your smile melting all hatred and bitterness inside
taking me to a land of happiness
a place where reality and fantasy collide
and even now
as my hair has gone silver
and my lips flat; and age has had its way
your eyes have not lost there ever gleaming twinkle
when you look at me;
wrap me in your ever strong arms
and whisper
"I love you"

copyright Valerie Long

> The Missing Pieces

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Mar 15th 2005

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Another of the top poem, I have been doing these lately. Just writing, and not thinking to see what I end up with. You all just are the ones who have to stomach it! Enjoy.

The picture, I found, But I think its cool how the old people are made out of two younger people which I thought went with this.

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wiltingflower Says:

that priview is amazing

Nightowl10175 Says:

Yeah, its really great isn't it?

Doodlibop Says:

at first it was the picture that got my attention.

but the poem is what got you the fav

beautiful

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Christians United Says:

That's really beautiful! ^^ Like the picutre too. I have trouble seeing the older version of them. Only seeing their youth in it, though I know both are there. ^^ Great job!

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cocaine Says:

Yes, the preview is amazing and the poetry is so glorious. Good job.

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clarebrady Says:

It's so beautiful...

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malice676767 Says:

the strong arms are making me laugh and you know why. Dude this poem is good. And you need to lay off the pot and stop freaking out on the norm things.

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