"Deep"

Apathy is like a sin:
It consumes and conceals
The things we ought to know.
Blankness always pulls me in;
Numbness controls my heart.
Here, I shall let you know�

When I get lost in these earthy eyes,
I�m really in the clouds.
Showing no emotion is how I
Retreat far down deeper,
Than any living creature has gone
Emotions chilly as ice,
Just a minute longer...and I'm gone.
My thoughts are much deeper�

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Mar 12th 2005

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Hehe...it's not much...seriously...
It's just an expression of the self, meant to explain what cannot otherwise be explained in speech. I don't communicate well with talk. I just like to listen and write... So, yeah... o_o;

EDIT: Uhh...it's not my pic, but it's a nice picture! It came off of google... XP So because I can draw if I can just get a new sketchbook to put my ideas in, I'm making this a WIP. Oh dear, sorry... x.x

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CrankyAsian Says:

Well, as the title says, the poem is pretty deep. It's good that you can show your emotions through drawings and writings, since I know some people who can't and get really frustrated without any emotional outlet.
But I really do like your drawing very much. It's calming.

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CrankyAsian Says:

LOL That's okay!! I did the same thing with one of my stories, added a nice picture I found, didn't know anything 'cause that was my first post, and all my comments were mainly about the picture, praising it and stuff instead of the story I wrote. I was pretty bummed. =]
Doesn't matter. The poem is good on it's own anyway. *high five*

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