-battle of the fogies-

by black phoenix

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-battle of the fogies-

time wears away at fragile youth,
pulling you
on a roller coaster ride to death.

soft, bland food
slides through a gummy mouth,
working its way down ancient pipes.

bingo cards blur beneath vanishing sight.
smoke permeates the air with a choking whisper.
cancer licks at aging lungs.

the television buzzes loudly,
noise inaudible to deaf ears.
bodies void of life
rock comatose before the evening news.

a single shriek tears through the stale air
as you fall upon a broken hip,
ending the battle of the fogies.
> 'oceanic evening' by black phoenix

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Mar 7th 2005
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battle dark darkness funny humor humorus poem poems poet poetry sad sadness write writing
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not my usual style.

inspired by a conversation i was having with one of the members at my poetry site.

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Lilanth Says:

Thats great.

Slipped Poison Says:

Because growing old sucks.