This....is the cream of my art so far. I placed my best efforts in this artwise and CG-wise (especially CG-wise). Unfortunately, on Sheezy as long there's blood it's already "M" rated, so this pic is M rated because of that one guy up there. Don't blame him...that is just how he lives. That poor, poor thing ;o;
It took me more than a week in duration, but it's really just a few days in total.
This is the cover for my fic (now in a slight halt, muse decided to go pictorial) which you can find the very rough draft here ---> http://www.dzarchive.com/iragination/forum/index.php?topic=2199.0
Read it if you want to.
Anyways, this is my X fanfic....which is not really that of a fanfic
. As you can see here, there's no X and Zero. Are you gasping yet? There's no X and Zero! Instead, you see these two strange characters on it, why? Well, those are the two main original characters. Why main? They play a major role in the story. Anyways, the lady in red is Aneta and the ...really bloodstained guy is Chris. Sounds familliar? I drawn and posted a few already. Oh, the very person on top is Rue, everything else is a spoiler.
Anyways, here's some Q and As....
1. With the amount of blondies you have in your fic, couldn't give a clear defination of which blondie it is! Can you fix that?
Uh...sorry, no. You see, Almost every lineart you see here is done on paper, and to correct this mistake I have to do a major overhaul both on paper and on PC. But it's minor, no?
2. Why isn't there any borders?
I usually prefer no borders, and when I tried to do one....I was too frustrated to implement it. There you go. This pic.
3. Why X and Zero is not in there?? How can it be an X fic without these two??
Who says no? Anyways, they ARE in the story (don't worry) but they have too much air time in the official artwork already so to put them on the cover will be throughly boring.
4. Why is Chris so...so...is this even safe for kids??
Sadly, he's not the cleanest person in the story...read to find out. About the blood....not sure. You be the judge. Anyways, he loves kids so don't worry. Just...don't try to pull a prank.
5. What is the story about anyway?
It's a palleral of X6 (hence Gate at the cover)....but I'll edit the long story later. Or read the fic..it's best so *nods*
Anything else?
Gate (C) Capcom...like they care about him anymore.
Aneta, Chris, Rue (C) Abuse, and feel my wrath! (so that means don't touch them without my permission)
Comments
Trinity630 Says:
Nice job.
Wolfshadow Says:
WOW. Nice CG skills. I love how Gate looks! So where is this fanfic being hosted, anyhow?
fs Says:
Actually, when it comes blood and the mature rating, it depends how you use it. In this situation, you don't have to rate it mature. In order to be mature, blood needs to be used in a more violent, taunting, and/or gory way. Dry blood like that isn't mature. Even some characters bleed on children's shows. I have an image with a bunny doll with blood on it, but it's okay.
Also, I'll do a little critic. Don't get angry, I got a crapload of critic when I first posted art. So, I'll go a little easy on you.
I'll first say your coloring is very nice. You should be proud of that. Took me a long while to figure out how to color.
Next, your lines. In some situations, having messy lines looks real nice. But not when you're coloring in the style you use. Don't be offended, there are dozens of different coloring and shading styles, but the one you're using doesn't go with messy lines. You can do several things to fix this. One, once you're done drawing, get a clean, hard to smudge sheet of paper and trace over your drawing as neatly as you can. Two, you can get some good pens, and just ink your drawings and erase excess (I didn't like to do this for awhile, and you probably won't), or three, once you're done CGing it on the computer, you can just trace over your lines with a black paintbrush or pen in your program, and then, erase the layer of your original drawing, leaving the smooth tracing.
The tracing takes a long while to get used to. And I'm positive that I'll get carpal tunnel because of it
And finally, your eyes are a bit too small. Don't get me wrong, I hate drawings with huge eyes, it makes me sick. But your eyes are slightly too small to give definition. Just making them a tad bit bigger, so you can see the pupils from further ranges would be nice.
Really, as big as this comment is, I only have two pieces of criticism. Everything else you do is splendid. Keep at it.
(also, what font is that? Just curious.... ;) )
Rodrigo Shin Says:
If it's got Gate, it's got a fav.
Great work on his forms blending. I still hope we see more of the guy one day.
Sesskirara Says:
OMG ITS AWESOME O____O
I love Gate, I love this!!!!