Looking good so far. You might want to smooth out the curve of the left breast (our right). It looks a little distorted. Some wider hips might help, also. It'll give the character a more feminine feel. The rib cage seems a little large at the present, which gives off a slightly masculine feel. So widening those should help to make her look more female. Those are some really excellent wings, I might add!
I like it. Only thing I see is the Avioness' neck is a little thin. Her waist on our leftside seems a little deep. Her winges are wonderful and I love the horses expression.
Comments
Nagel Says:
Cool
shekeira Says:
Well, I think that overall it's looking real good. As for critique ... perhaps the ears are a bit too large.
soulsinger Says:
It's looking very lovely and I especially love how you've done the birdie critters wings.
It's just going to turn out lovely, I know it!
Blaze Says:
hmmmmm i love it whole... but as critick.. perhaps bird thing"s neck is a bit thin... ovO
Midnight Fury Says:
Looking good so far. You might want to smooth out the curve of the left breast (our right). It looks a little distorted. Some wider hips might help, also. It'll give the character a more feminine feel. The rib cage seems a little large at the present, which gives off a slightly masculine feel. So widening those should help to make her look more female. Those are some really excellent wings, I might add!
Savaaha Says:
I like it. Only thing I see is the Avioness' neck is a little thin. Her waist on our leftside seems a little deep. Her winges are wonderful and I love the horses expression.