Fade away.

by AedanQualtion

in Completed Works

Fade away.

I sit in my bedroom, thinking.
I pick up my glass, drinking.
I look around my room, bleeding.
I look at the walls, they are dripping.

I look closer at the bleeding walls.
It looks like my own blood.
I sit in the corner of the room.
I stay alone, away from everyone.

I think, I stare, I speak aloud.
"I wish i could just fade away,
as i wont be missed"
I sigh, I wait.

As I look up, the door opens.
A tall man walks up to me and draws a sword
I stare, he laughs.
I stand, as I do so, I am kicked back down again.

The man raises his sword and with one more kick...
I cant speak nor breathe. It happened so fast.
I have faded away now.
All that remains is an empty shell.
And the blood, loads of blood.
> 'Expressions' by AedanQualtion
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Mature Feb 23rd 2005
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anger death emotion
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I think this was one of my VERY FIRST dark poems... after a 2 year break from it.. naturally :p

Comments

djazqu Says:

Really dark. i like the rhyming, it's got a fast tempo and deep meaning.

Nightowl10175 Says:

This is really good. The way it ends makes the whole thing.

AedanQualtion Says:

hehe i thanks for all your nice comments ^__^ Im in the best mood ever, and im posting these things O_O' Great isnt it? lol

AedanQualtion Says:

Does anyone want to see what i look like? >.>' im kinda ugly though lol. (chubby too >,<' ) I wear eyeliner alot.. lol

Nightowl10175 Says:

eyeliner is fun..