The Fallen

by nikkiwhitecraft

in Completed Works

< 'eye' by nikkiwhitecraft

The Fallen

The Fallen


Feathers falling, with the rain,
Covering the earth, like a stain,
Pain from every move you make,
Inside, an endless ache,
Taken from the only place you know,
Away from the bright warm glow,

Thrown into the endless dark,
Flames of hate being sparked,
Evil seed growing like a weed,
Oh how you were mislead,
Time away from that shining place,
Ashamed to show your face,

Staying in the place called hell,
You never meant for this cell,
But here you are,
Your heart a scar,
Why did you partake?
Didn’t you see the mistake?

The price it would cost,
When the two of you’d crossed,
Wings turned ebony black,
Even when you beat them back
Flightless you shall stay,
This is the price you pay,

Years have passed,
Many names you have massed,
Satan, Lucifer,
Are only a few,
Yet I know what you are,
Or what you think you were,

An Angel with wings of night,
Someone who has lost the sight,
Fallen from the heavens above,
Shunned by his love,
Sad, scared and alone,
Just wanting somewhere to call home
> 'Broken Heart' by nikkiwhitecraft

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Feb 16th 2005
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I was just sitting when this came to me, it's a bit confusing at first but I'm starting to like it.

also the picture isn't mine, I just added the black background and the blood

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Drak Ass Says:

it kinda looks like ff8's Squall, but with wings.i like the poem too.

AyameKunama Says:

i luv the poem *faves*^.^!!

xenacreed Says:

i like this a lot..
i can tell you put your heart into it..
wonderful work hun

rockerchick101 Says:

i can feel the pain in this. its sad but showing that everyone has a beautiful side to them. thanx 4 the fav!

Yammo Says:

I'm passing this along to mah demon, Velly.

I think this is great!