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Once more for the day of love
I love you so much
i hold you so dear
would you be mine?
could i call you my sweet valentine?
could i say your beauty defines
what i wish i could have all the time
you smell just like the roses that bloom
the one good thing to look forward to
your shimmering face
yet you are far away
so far away that i feel left in the cold
i know one day i'll try to ask
but until then i will just sit here and watch
lulled by your sweet smell
intrigued by your different style
so much i would run miles
just to see you smile
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Comments
Orcinus Says:
I'm really not a fan of poetry at all, but I love the photograph... the lighting is so soft, no hard shadows or anything... Did you take the photo yourself or did you find it on the 'net? If you shot it, what did you do for setup?
RiceCake Says:
Pretty blue rose. *__*
Froggie Says:
Could use with some capitalization. Other than that, simply great.
I love the ending, too.
BigTheCat2004 Says:
Nice poem! But THAT ROSE! I LOVE IT!