The Little GIrl in the Shadows

by Siobhan a tron

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The Little GIrl in the Shadows

There once was a girl who was taught to behave
Her heart was swollen, beginning to concave
A girl who no one seemed to care about
She was taught to obey and never to pout
Angered by her fellow souls
People stopped to watch her unfold
She was one to suffer, suffered her fair share
Never enjoyed love, the love that was rare
Sad and depressed merely a girl
Shattered dreams, her world began to twirl
All of the hate that she had seen
That's why little girls should be brought up like queens
> 'Why did you leave me??' by Siobhan a tron

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Feb 14th 2005
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i wrote this last year, it was one of my first real poems ...this one is for alli, because she is my inspiration for drawing and writing

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hochan Says:

This is just beautiful! ^^ My poetry skill is severely underdeveloped, but I still like reading it (poetry)

And I'm especially fond of rhyming ^^

I think it's great. It really flows nicely, and it tells a nice story, too ^^

Siobhan a tron Says:

thank you ever sooo much you make me feel sooo cool... ( notice <--- im a nerd!!!) aww..anyways thank you soo much

Sweet Lady Says:

*tear* its so beautiful

Lemony Fresh Says:

it's so pretty it makes me drool~

Siobhan a tron Says:

im drooling too (what are you doing???...im not drooling i just said that to make you feel better... ...

Bluangel Says:

Ah! That last line was the best!

CoolCatCallie Says:

Awww wow, how cute!
What a great poem, I'm gonna save that on my comp ;-P Keep it up, babe!
~Callie
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