The Ghost's Breath

by Nightowl10175

in Completed Works

The Ghost's Breath

Whispered lies inside my head tell me
You were chose again
Pushed under, to invisibility of your shadow
Your echoing reality, penetrate my bliss

and I can't fight the lie
I can't hide to see what's real
I would rather die
Than be second to you (again)

Rescue me,
Seduce me,
Kill me,
Sweetly

Startled glances rush me deeper
Paranoia like swallowed pins
Bring me closer to the edge of identity
As another calls your name

and I can't hate the truth
I'm blind to hear the story
As you slowly kill the youth
I am second to you (again)

Find me,
Love me,
Empty me,
Within


copyright Valerie Long

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Feb 3rd 2005
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I don't know why i put lyrical, I guess I could see someone singing this.

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morrigan Says:

Beautiful.< 3

TheHusband Says:

Nicely done

megan melancholy Says:

Very nice.

I like the rhythym, too.

malice676767 Says:

You've read this to me. I like it. But not as much as that one you texted me I must find it.

ForgottenInnocence Says:

this is really pretty, flows really well when you read it outloud (or whisper it so others don't think you're talking to yourself) good job

Ink star Says:

I can picture someone singing this indeed