A Serial Killing Clown

by The Unforgiven

in Completed Works

A Serial Killing Clown

The smiles he wears is totally fake
Because he wants your soul to take.
All he wants to do is kill you,
Maybe even your mother too.

He walks around with his knife
Hoping to murder another life.
He is out for massive blood spill
And he is not afaird to kill.

So go and run as fast as you can.
Hide from his evil and begin to pray.
His suit is covered in crimson red
From those that are now dead.

The body count will rise
As he causes the demise.
He wears the blood as a mask,
But not to hide his task.

Be afraid, he smells your fear.
Be scared, because he is here.
Look behind you, then you'll see
What that sound might really be.
> 'My Desktop' by The Unforgiven

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Jan 31st 2005
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Since everyone hates clowns anyways, why not make them more terrified of them?
Personally, clowns don't bother me, but you know...there are people that are scared of them just because of a certain movie that percieved them as evil.

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blade Says:

sweet. gave me a little tingle down my spine.

The Unforgiven Says:

That's the feeling I wanted to give to people! Thank you!

RedxRain Says:

Holly shit, I gotta favorite this!

WanderingSoul Says:

ooooooo....... spooky.

PinkFairyLotus Says:

I dont hate clowns, I rather like them :) (especially undead ones who use their intestines to make balloon animals! )

SteelVenom Says:

The picture is freaking me out! Did you do that???

justinaerni Says:

Awesome work. Well thought out.

black phoenix Says:

the rhyme scheme was a bit forced(due to writers block, im sure.) a bit of grotesque imagery would have been nice. you gave us a taste, but not quite enough..

gamesharker1 Says:

Sweet poem

Tempesta Says:

That is so John Wayne Gacy. It should have been a bit more graphic and gore-focused, but it was pretty good.