Torn -- Komm Susser Tod

by Taitai

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Mature Jan 29th 2005
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A tribute to the great Asuka Soryu Langley.

Komm Susser Tod
I know, I know I let you down
I've made a fool of myself
I thought that I could live for no one else...

And now.. through all the hurt and pain
Its time for me to respect the ones you love
mean more than any thing..

So with sadness in my heart
I feel the best thing I can do
Is end it all and leave forever...

What's done is done it feels so bad
what once was happy is now sad
I'll never love again my world is ending...

I wish that I could turn back time
Cuz now the guilt is all mine
Can't live without the trust of those you love...

I know we can't forget the past
We can't forget love and pride
because of that it's killing me inside...


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Advance Critique Encouraged, however, it is supposed to be in anime style. If I were to have drawn the actual character, her features would have been even more exaggerated. I'd rather not hear about how her 'anatomy is incorrect' or how 'it shouldn't be anime style OMFG!'

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Jig raccoon Says:

The poem is truly beutiful
its rather sad... im sorry im not that good with crritique

jimsupreme Says:

awesome pic . beautiful colors!

BADBadger Says:

Amazing!!

Ashenpaw Says:

Meh, critique I only give to people who ask me personally for it - otherwise I'm unqualified. I liked the angle, it's refreshing and nice.