Not as poetic, more like a poetic-short story but I love it. A random fun exercise of just describing a scene and letting the plot randomly unfold from there (a little too randomly if you ask me). I will eventually add more just before the wolves part, because it's very sudden and awkward
Enjoy the imagery, I tried my best
Comments
yomo Says:
I love this poem! I like the picture as well! If I look really closely, I can see the camera
Booky Says:
It's cute, but the rythym definately isn't your best. Wonderful imagry, though, and I liked your flow of the words and the story.

Undead Sadist Says:
O_O
I heart this!