> 'Silver Brook Prologue Page one' by UltimiaVlad

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Jan 28th 2011
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A dark rainy night. The shuffling of trees drain out the sound of a person's steps.

My Opinion;

I like this page BUT the Church. >:I
Its too straight on.
The boxes in the inked version was too... leanie. It wasn't straight. I had to fix it, but atleast it will be a constant.
Love the shading in the first panel, but then the bush to grass transition isn't too great.

Art, Characters, Story (C) myself, PlazzMan, UltimiaVlad

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