Wow!! Man.. after i read all your comments, i got VERY motivated

and here it is! pages 3 and 4

ohohoho!!
I tried out the "vertical" page layout... let's see how this one fares ^__^
enjoy people ^___^
again, sorry for the messyness ^^
Oh yes, i decided to make my comic mature... cause the use of language... hope you understand ^^
*EDIT* oh yea.. and remember kids, this is just a story! it's scripted and i need to follow the script!! things in here may or may not be true in real life ;o;
like for example.. i know i'm the sux! XP
Comments
Wonchop Says:
little self-promotion never hurts, ey Ota.
Funky!
SpineJ Says:
Lmao =D
sw2k Says:
Sweet!
Joanime Says:
OMG FIRST COMMENT LOLOLOLOLOLOL
Smiffy is so badass!!! I cant wait to see why/how/when/ Ota pwned him O_O
</sarcasm>
*ahem* Awesome, awesome, awesome.
NALO Says:
PrincessAurora Says:
Haha! Love!

>=( He can do whatever he wants. It's his comic. Hoo-hah!
I'm going to make some Ota-kun fanart.
Leprechaun Removed Says:
lol, u think to much of ur slef >=(
... and like joanime said, i cant wait to see how u beat smiffy
RabidWabbit83 Says:
I like this Lay out better. Its easier to read. And I cant wait to see the next one. Im lost on the story though. *blinks*
Stars Says:
o__O OMG.. Yes.. You are 'Awesome' xDD
After reading this.. I'm still hungry for more.. and sad that I read it so fast *whimper*
Devilchicka Says:
ahhh!ota-kun!
*nod*

yeah the "vertical" layout is better, atleast I think so
damn, I really love your style!it's so cute you just want to cuddle with all of them!