Haeven Unicorn take two

Another illustration for Isabella's LARP, for the homepage. She asked me to draw a unicorn and gave me permission to design him. Only he has to be white and look 'royal'-like -.-' I'm getting bored with white unicorns.
Anyway, this is my second attempt to do a decent sketch of the critter. I'm not that good at drawing horse-like bodies; actually I suck at anything horse-related... Also I didn't want him to be too horse-like, at least not when he has to be white.
So I tried to give him a more deer-like face and his body ended up looking rather short.
It's hard to see, but the front leg feathering starts near the elbow. Kept his horns and lion-like tail and made the ears more fluffy Ops! Forgot to split his hooves!

Any suggestions will be appreciated! Correction to anatomy and so on. And comments in general will be loved