Comic Page 2 (sketch)

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Mature Jan 16th 2005
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page 2 of this comic i'm working on, right now this is only trhe pencil cuz there is alot of mistakes on here i have to fix, plus i have to draw a background for it. they are fooling around in Than's dojo (Than is the dood woth the glasses) and the chick that wants to do him her name is Rika, there now you guys know there names ^^. well if theres anything u guys think i should fix up or what not please let me know. i love getting from u guy ^^ and please don't get mad that i don't comment back, i'm doing my best to comment on everyone stuff i'm really am, so please don't get upset. ok enought take back to work ^^

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Hellbender DX Says:

Hehe... Nice comic, so far.

ambex Says:

WOOT their doinging it

Danticus Says:

Gotta love the faces ;)

Dark Piro Says:

very good

miyusuke Says:

Cute couple scene. :)

xypherzx Says:

Awesome.. thats so nice ^^ Eyebrows seem to be missing on Than.. but since its unfinished I'm sure you will put them in the finished work..

xypherzx Says:

Oh and I think you should change the way Than's hands look when Rika "pounced" him.. Since he seems to be surprised of Rika's action his hands could have spread and stuff.. ^^

paradox Says:

Damn...why'd they stop lol
Interesting work so far dude!

Bluedestiny Says:

really go so far

Ronald MacK Says:

Wow, excellent flow.