It's my current piece that I'm working on.. >.> I still need to make a short lil break before the 2nd melody comes in but.. I had you guys hear at least both melodies basslines and such :3
I agree with the above, the melodies do sound very similar, and I think you'd benefit from bringing in something else, maybe a different instrument (playing harmony or a countermelody) would work...
I'd probably recommend trying to thicken your tracks up a bit, they have good basics but they really need to be thicker and a bit larger, add some other stuff, background harmonies, arpeggio's etc.
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Try some more variation.
Inter Says:
I agree with the above, the melodies do sound very similar, and I think you'd benefit from bringing in something else, maybe a different instrument (playing harmony or a countermelody) would work...
Definitely a start, though!
tekkentool Says:
I'd probably recommend trying to thicken your tracks up a bit, they have good basics but they really need to be thicker and a bit larger, add some other stuff, background harmonies, arpeggio's etc.