It's a Beautiful Day

by Setsuna Toushirou

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Description

Nov 5th 2009
Tags:
cat catalyna catalyna ai britannia catalyna hamilton catalyna lamperouge code geass ocs kim kimber kimber avalondel kimcat
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35
Comments:
3
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Song: Beautiful Day
Artist: DJ Melodie
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sGbaHX0uRYY
c-can someone get a background for me? ;3; you know i have no tones anymore, and i suck at doing them myself. i-i would love you forever if someone could ;3; it doesn't have to be fancy, just something simple and fitting p-please?
-ahem-
okay, enough whining. i used the amazing tutorial by the epic amazing :devsherbertkisses:, and this is the result~! i-i'm not too happy with Catalyna's arms, b-but hopefully i can be better with that when she gets the basic body tutorial out ;3; otherwise~!
i'm totally happy with this picture, it's so adorable a-and it's almost official looking 8'D <sub>Kimber looks so adorable in this </sub>

Comments

Kayce Says:

Her neck looks a bit too long.

Other than that, looks pretty cute.

BloodWars Says:

That's so cute.

FoxinRamen Says:

the detail on the guy's clothing is pretty okay in design.. It'd be nice if the girl's outfit was just as decently done, rather than just plain..

Anatomy wise; my goodness, her neck is indeed quite longer than average like Kayce says.
Their arms are too skinny, way too lengthy, and so stringy, doesn't look like there's much muscle in them.
Your legs are way too long as, since by the looks of where the guy's knee is, their thighs are probably 2x long.
And please, look up a side torso and see how it looks properly, because this couple just look, WAY. too. skinny D:

Sorry to be harsh, but it's just really hard not to be with a picture like this <xP; When you pay attention to the little things about it, you can notice the many things that still need to be worked on.

I've done my usual, made my pointless critique. Go ahead and ignore it |P