framework, critiques?

by S p e c i a l

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Nov 5th 2009
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framework for a piece I am working on


got the idea from something I saw this morning
got the inspiration from something a friend said

I know the lines are messy its just framework.
her hand is sort of curved, you can't tell yet
since I havn't shaded but no, its not just
unreasonably small. other than that,
I am not seeing anything. So have at it. c:

please!

Comments

LEMONcube Says:

Hmm.

Okay Joley will try for once.

Umm.
The top one..
I can tell the shirt is suppose to be a bit bigger but maybe some more natural curvature?
The arms just seem a little stiff.

and the bottom the eyes are bothering me a bit,
They don't seem to match.


But I really like this so far it is adorable <;

adorable Says:

want red lines? c;