The clothes should have a bit more folds with how they're bending like that. And there should be more colors and contrast between the shades. They shouldn't be a lighter and darker of the base color.
And there doesn't seem to be a cast shadow when the hair goes over the clothes.
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Kayo Mccloud Says:
Im seriously serious
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Its awesome sis
The clothes should have a bit more folds with how they're bending like that. And there should be more colors and contrast between the shades. They shouldn't be a lighter and darker of the base color.
And there doesn't seem to be a cast shadow when the hair goes over the clothes.
Keep those things in mind and you'll get better.