Wishes Fall Upon Those Who Only Dream

by oneshot

in Completed Works

Wishes Fall Upon Those Who Only Dream

The stras have forsaken me from their luminescent glow tonight.

They fear that I may eclipse them with my darkened heart.
An injustice and diservice to all those around me.

Screams of ingorance echo upon the cities.

I fell off a tower
Not sure, how to feel

Unsure about it-

About everything and none of it I try to

Coherently sung but out of tune
I adhere my words by time.

Not one schmeme or unhatched plot has split my mind.

Wishing on the stars that shun me
I pray all will be well so that one day I may be abl to earn their trust
To earn the right, so as not to be seen any longer just as injust.

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Nov 2nd 2009
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dream fall poem stars
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Another poem I suppose

Comments

Lost Love 27 Says:

I like it. Very nice. c:

Firebane Yamaneko Says:

Sad D:
It's a fitting title, for sure. And a true one.

Bozo Says:

Sound and working title on this one. Good solid words to, though you have many spelling mistakes ( not the end of the world,just pointing it out).

Yes I like it a lot.

xdbzgt1235 Says:

Nice poem, good wordplay and it mkes sense.