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Breached Beyond
Couldn't find my way around this place.
The city lights blind me.
A reminder of a purity that has now been lost.
But a sign of false penalties and realities that tie my dreams together.
I feel like I've forgotten something - I - I -I find, no words
My mouth it...
I can't speak
I'm trapped within my words
Error
Error
Error
Error
This is all wrong
I
I want to-
Freedom is my misery
Sweetness be my cruelty
If I found this
If I found these
Words which I cannot speak
My mouth
Shot off by a gun held by a disembodied hand
It bleeds the colors of my life
These city lights, they blind you. Ya know that right?
Who are you talking to, me? Why me? I don't want this I-
Shut up, listen, no time for your worries.
You've got more important things to do then worry about your missing mouth.
I have judged, and you are condemned to keep all thoughts in your mind.
I will strip you of your human rights.
But you are just a kid?
Can you read my mind?
No, I do not read minds.
I create thoughts.
I control all.
But hold no true power of my own.
Error
Deletion
Complete...
Lose all sanity
But gain all knowledge.
You can grasp what you seek.
But will never know it.
Never being able to control it.
That is why-
That is why-
I...
Termination
I...can see...
Complete
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Comments
Bozo Says:
none sense = makes sense to me. Once again you have captured a feeling from the well of words you have in you. This time there are too numerous lines I like to be able to pick out the one I like the most.
Firebane Yamaneko Says:
How dramatic. It seems familiar, but I know I've never heard it before :T It does make sense, somehow. Though it could just me me and Bozo... but that should be enough to say it is without much to prove otherwise, I think... Who knows?
I love these poems. The ideas and stories are so unique, but it's not really until you read it that you think "oh... hey, I've known this for years." It's amazing, really