just a pointer, if you want him to be vulgar, having him say "Screw Off" sounds like he's holding back to an extent, whereas if he were to merely say "fuck off" instead, it would get the point across nicely.
Heh, if you want to censor "the bird", use the index finger instead; it implies without being totally rude. You're pretty good at keeping things in proportion.
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harukofan Says:
just a pointer, if you want him to be vulgar, having him say "Screw Off" sounds like he's holding back to an extent, whereas if he were to merely say "fuck off" instead, it would get the point across nicely.
Foxcat Says:
Heh, if you want to censor "the bird", use the index finger instead; it implies without being totally rude.
You're pretty good at keeping things in proportion.