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Endless sadness is so suffocating
Wishing I could sleep forever so I wouldn't have to deal with all this pain
For once in my life wanting something to go right...
The pain is so agonizing
Wishing this pain would go away
Knowing it will always be here
Crying till I can't shed another tear...
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Comments
Zuon Says:
You use the word "pain" too much.
*Slaps*
DO BETTER! D8<
brendonian Says:
whats wrong?
Keldorix Says:
this is too sad, i wouldn't expect it from you, Angel-Chan
frozen scent of love Says:
You're getting better at writing,
but try to stray away from typical
clichés like 'endless sadness' and
whatnot. I suggest you reading
stuff by people like
to find a bit of inspiration.
it's nice, though.
c: needs a bit of work.
/hugs and gives her a bunny
Feel better
C':
faulty pitch Says:
=/
That is some pretty deep stuff.
Good job with it!
I hope that you will be able to get rid of the pain and sadness though, if this really is an expression of it.
necromancerman Says:
Nice job. *hugs* Hope you aren't feeling this way right now! D:
gaara4eva Says:
i feel like this every day but i still luv it
Focus Says:
Heres a fuckin poem.
Your a loser
I'm gonna shoot her
Your a worthless piece of shit
Why wouldn't you just admit
That lick your friends cunt
Under that 200 year old tree stump
'cause you know that, baby i'm your biggest fan, i'll follow you until you love me!
Do you wanna fuck?
BUSY!