Stranger Love

by Lost Love 27

in Writings

Stranger Love

I see you there,
And you see me.
Both unaware,
That we will be,

Forever connected,
By that moment of time.
We were infected,
It must be a crime.

You boarded your train,
And I only observed.
We remained the same,
Our gaze conserved.

On the other side of the glass,
Your smile was sweet.
Your train moving, our time pass,
Never again shall we meet.

I watched you fade away,
And I never felt danger.
For the first time, today,
I fell in love with a stranger.

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Oct 25th 2009
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love poem sadish stranger underground
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Poetry mood.
Random, yes.

Critique? I didn't try very hard, but I'd still like to know what you think. Improvements? Style, form? Anything.

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