Party in the USA WIP2

by Firebane Yamaneko

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Oct 25th 2009
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IT'S NOT GONNA WORK, GO HERE:
http://img11.imageshack.us/i/dancewip6t.tif/

Lineart. Plus a shadow, because having him just floating there was driving me insane. Well... more than I already am
I think I'll just post these as I go along, because. Yeah.
WHEEEEE-
I haven't put your icon in this one yet, so I will just to keep it consistent. Now I'm off to watch The Thief Lord, which I never did finish reading

Alfredde is Hetalia.
Art is mine.
I am me.

Comments

TehD Says:

LOL
Epic winnnn. SO EPIC. fffff.
( Hey, maybe it won't work because it's a .tif? )

KakumeyKaguya Says:

Oh this is really good so far! And I commend you for trying such a difficult pose ^^

Though there are a few things off.

First is the legs, they both look a bit broken.

The one pulled up to his stomach isn't all that bad, but the foot being turned slightly doesn't match his knee. Simple fix would be to just turn the foot forward again~

As for the other leg, the knee is rotated to far in comparison to his hips. His leg would basically have to dislocate to do that, mega ouchies ;; Maybe next time you could try having it rotated only slightly? Though then you'd have to hide most of the calf, which is another difficult thing

And finally, the arm on the ground. o3o

I really commend you for trying perspective out! Because perspective's a jerk to work with, I know from experience xwo;; Anyways, try having the arm show just a tidge more or it creates the illusion it's flat

All in all, a really great picture! You've got a lot of potential to go a lot further in your art! Keep practicing and you'll be one of the best someday! ^^